here is my next page -- i´m not absolutly happy with the composition -- the 3. panel is far to dark and the 5. and 6. panel should have a bit of the wall in it. Mhh - but i keep the changes to the end and work on with the next page... and yes: comments are welcome!
And an other question: Do you prefer the dark pages (as page 1) or the ligther/braunish ones (as page 4)...
Hi Nele, It's beautiful!! Met
Hi Nele,
It's beautiful!! Met PieR yesterday at Maison des Auteurs, in Angoulême, where I'll be staying a few more days with Rommel. We expect to meet Faezel as well on Friday or Saturday... Take care, Amélie
I like the darkpages because
I like the darkpages because they have more contrast (i like contrast!) But Lighter/braunish is okay also. contrast makes me feel inside a modern building (or futuristic home or very expensive kitchen). the setting in page 1 is a loboratory so it fits. With page 4 i feel like a lazy afternoon, with foggy environment (pollution?). i think lighter page 4 and darker page 1 are okay combinations?
When I saw the unfinished page 4 without the lower panels the wall in panel two looked like a strong beam of light at first glance. but now it's okay. I like that the French boss can also stretch his head! like an evil snake/dragon.