Hello everyone...
Looking at Nele and PieR's inking pages really scared the hell out of me. My problem is, I always think too much and wanted to do the perfect masterpiece (Well, that's not going to happen and there are no such thing!).
So, I wake up from sulking and started to...
Here we go,
Sorry everyone for the late entry!
Right, the next WIRES* workshop destination is Berlin. As we initially planned. Foremost, I thank you Giovanni and Nele Broenner for being a great and wonderful host that made me feels at home while I stayed in Berlin.
I...
Hello everyone,
This is my update before I leave to Berlin. Phew! Hopefully, in Berlin I`ll manage to finish up all the pages. Can`t wait to see you Nele!
Take care all.
So here are 2 storyboard pages my attempt to fix the flow of the story where I was stuck. I based it on PieR's humiliation suggestion (thanks PieR) and have slugboy uttter a phrase incorrectly making his classmates and professor laugh.
Another thing PieR mentioned is selling the spray...
Here are two pictures: One is a revision of storyboard's page 1 - changed the panels to add a city image and more cleaner look as what i got from PieR's suggestion. Smoother introduction to the slugboy character. I also wanted to put "unfinished" buildings in the city and more "junk" future...