So here are 2 storyboard pages my attempt to fix the flow of the story where I was stuck. I based it on PieR's humiliation suggestion (thanks PieR) and have slugboy uttter a phrase incorrectly making his classmates and professor laugh.
Another thing PieR mentioned is selling the spray paints to slugboy. I find the idea better than just having LeO give them for free - to have an "economic" aspect in the scene.
comments are welcome!
Hi Nele ^_^
i won't be putting translations for 11001001101 code unless it is necessary to make the particular panel understandable. But maybe in the end i will put tranlations/footnotes - i've thought about that possibility but unsure how to place them in the page without making it too crampy so i didn't continue.
do you think i need them?
Mh: If you don´t need to
Mh: If you don´t need to translate the code thats great!
I imagine it in this way: a story which works without text/words, but you have the code to make clear to the reader that they talk - just in a launguage they don´t understand.
Like beeing in a foreign country or foreign time.
If it works (?) I would go for no footnotes or other kind of translation.
Hey Powil
I agree with PieR - the storyboard looks very good. I love the building under constraction. And if LeO sells the spray - right - that fits better with economics.
Do you have any plans to make the reader able to understand the 11 001 0011 01 code your guys use to communicate? Something like footnots?