I still think about the order of the pages - the old page one becomes page two now. Like this I can keep the secret of the head-changing-machine for a little longer.
I´ll post a redone storyboard in the next days... we go for 12 pages, don´t we?
cheers *nele
PieR -
as you said - I added a towel and the left panel is darker now ... it works well!
Nele
Great, I'm happy if it pleases you. I think it works a bit better this way (just a bit, because everything was anyway very clear!)
Well done!
Hallo Nele!
yes. i hope we can have 12 pages each =)
The other version of the first page may actually be enough for some readers to get the idea behind changeable heads. So i like this one more!
... what happens to the other first page? It looks like the "Title page" on your storyboard. What do you think about showing just the machine without the headless body..?