Page (( 12 ))

nele's picture
October.30.2009
  • http://4wires.net/sites/default/files/imagecache/preview/page_12.jpg

Ok - here is my last page. I have been thinking about the end for a while: like this it is quiet positive, I guess.

Comments: 3
tagged in: end, page 12
pier gajewski wrote 44 weeks 5 days ago

For all this you decide of

For all this you decide of course, but when I saw that last panel, I actually thought it would be a great 13th... but on the other hand, i'd love to see a big forest done by you, and i wonder if having her running off the city would not be too much??? But it really depends how you do it of course.
Now, my only real advise on that:
Read all your story in the correct order. Take the time for it, and think about its rythm. If you think, it's good to slow the action before the end (because of the lack of text) and because we'll have her alone running away... and so take more time to show what is happening ... go for it.
Just think of the rythm of the story I guess and how you want it to be... :)
Good luck

pier gajewski wrote 44 weeks 5 days ago

Niiiiiice and FANTASTIC! Very

Niiiiiice and FANTASTIC!
Very intersting in many points ;)

Have you been thinking of a 13th panel??
or did you just drop the idea ? :)

nele wrote 44 weeks 5 days ago

Hey PieR!

I´m very happy you like it.
No - I didn´t drop the idea of a 13th panel, but I couldn´t make up my mind so far. Either to draw a following 13th page with mor forest and plants and animal or to draw a city looking like a tower she is running from? In this case page 12 would become page 13 and I draw a new number 12. (Yes?)
What do you think?

Recent comments

Syndicate