Hello everyone,
This is my update before I leave to Berlin. Phew! Hopefully, in Berlin I`ll manage to finish up all the pages. Can`t wait to see you Nele!
Take care all.
Here we go -- slowly I really get into the storg+setting.
Can´t wait to see what you two are doing in Angouleme?
And all the best to Amelie!
here is my next page -- i´m not absolutly happy with the composition -- the 3. panel is far to dark and the 5. and 6. panel should have a bit of the wall in it. Mhh - but i keep the changes to the end and work on with the next page... and yes: comments are welcome!
And an other question:...
So here are 2 storyboard pages my attempt to fix the flow of the story where I was stuck. I based it on PieR's humiliation suggestion (thanks PieR) and have slugboy uttter a phrase incorrectly making his classmates and professor laugh.
Another thing PieR mentioned is selling the spray...
Here are two pictures: One is a revision of storyboard's page 1 - changed the panels to add a city image and more cleaner look as what i got from PieR's suggestion. Smoother introduction to the slugboy character. I also wanted to put "unfinished" buildings in the city and more "junk" future...