Some text is still missing -- but I have to go to the intire comic as soon as i inked the last page
Here 's the following...
hello boys and girls,
I still like to change the second panel on the upper left side of page 6. The coloring of the first page 7 is not finished jet - the chicken needs some contrast ... and the owl some details.
Just posted a second page 7 -- have a look at the inking and tell me....
Hello everyone,
This is my update before I leave to Berlin. Phew! Hopefully, in Berlin I`ll manage to finish up all the pages. Can`t wait to see you Nele!
Take care all.
So here are 2 storyboard pages my attempt to fix the flow of the story where I was stuck. I based it on PieR's humiliation suggestion (thanks PieR) and have slugboy uttter a phrase incorrectly making his classmates and professor laugh.
Another thing PieR mentioned is selling the spray...